One frozen, icy day I got washed away by a giant wave. The wave tore apart all the houses and took me. boom, crash, splash went the houses the wave was a sky tower. Then I saw a gigantic, yellow creature come towards me. My eyes popped like popcorn.
I wondered what would happen, I was panicking like a chicken. A man threw me an old scruffy rope that had knots and was just about to rip apart. I climbed on and he said this is a giant tsunami. I was soaking like cloths in the washing machine.
we were sinking and the water got deeper I was shivering . But the man used an enchanted silver thing with a red dot on the top. when he turned it, water came out and the water got a lot more bubbly and it got warmer.
It was like hot Milo. Then the bright yellow creature jumped, I fell off and I was frightened. As I took my face out of the water my mum told me to get out of the bath and turn off the tap because I made huge mess on the floor.
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ReplyDeletegood job peter i like your duck as a shark
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